Post by Mudfur on Jun 29, 2008 19:02:17 GMT -5
Please tell me how you like this, your opinion of the characters, what you think, and if you want me to continue writing this.
In the midst of a dark cave, two figures dared to have a conversation. "Sir, I do believe it is time." The first figure said, in a gruff voice. "Very well. Blow the horn. Go to the hill to do to so." growled the second voice. "Yes Sir." The first figure replied. A wolf emerged from the cave, it's damp grey fur shining in the moonlight. The wolf approached a large hill near the cave. It pulled out a silver horn with lots of jewels on it. The wolf put the horn to it's lips and played a sad song. It sounded like a cry of help from people who have gone through years of torture and abuse.
"C'mon guys! We have to get this." Niki said impatiently to the other girls. She flipped her red hair behind her hair just as one of them answered. "But Niki, it's SO late." Leo pointed out. Two of the other girls replied to Leo's comment. "Yeah Niki." They chimed. The fifth girl in the white shirt and grey and pink plaid skirt (which is what the other girls were wearing, but the pink was replaced with their favorite colors) looked pretty angry. "Niki, I have to get my beauty sleep." The girls all turned to the cheer captain for her response. "Fine. I suppose we can't cheer like this." Niki said sadly. "Fine then, let's all go home." Behanna, the one in the pink, said. Just as they all started out of the gym, they heard the most unusual sound.
It was a sound that expressed a lot of sadness. The girls all stood there, soundless and speechless. The floors shook a bit, and Sophie screamed. The floor cracked and all the girls experienced falling a very long time.
The girls were immediately on their feet. "What are these clothes?" Brehanna asked, for the girls clothes had changed. Niki was wearing a strapless turquoise leotard with a darker turquoise skirt over it. Her boots were also turquoise, a tad bit darker than the skirt (Picture).She had large red with black tips wolf ears at the top of her head, as well.( The doll maker didn't have ears like this.) Brehanna was wearing a short pink dress, strapless as well, and her boots were white with pink at the top. She had smaller grey ears. Sophie was wearing a red top that had white lace around it. She had a red skirt and white boots with red at the top, and her ears were small and brown. Leo was wearing a dark blue dress with a ribbon in the back, and she had dark blue boots. Her set of wolf ears were black. Rebbecca had a purple strapless shirt with a purple mini skirt and purple boots. Rebecca's ear's were white. Each of the girls had a tail that matched her ears. Each of them also had a a small black stick-looking-thing with gold tips.
"Is everyone okay?" Niki asked.
"What's this?" Rebbecca asked. "Where ARE we?" Leo pondered. "I'm fine." Sophie answered in a sick-sounding voice.
A voice said. "Welcome ladies." All the girls turned. "Who's there?" Niki asked in a demanding voice.
The voice chuckled, as if seeing the girls angry at it was funny. "I suppose I should introduce myself." It said.
"Yeah, and tell us where we are and why." Leo said.
"Alright, alright. Here's the story: For thousands of years this magical forest flourished with plants and animals." The figure sighed. "Then they came."
"Who is 'they'?" Sophie asked.
"They are... evil. Trying to tear down the forest and take over the magical creatures. For years, we've been waiting for you five to come and defeat the evil."
The girls all stood there.
"I'll help." Niki said determinedly. "Me too." Leo said.
"Us too." Sophie and Rebbecca declared together. Brehanna stood there, silent.
"Bre, aren't you going to help, too?" Sophie asked.
"No."
"NO!?"
"No."
"Why?" Leo asked.
"This is all a stupid and weird dream, why should I help?"
"Because, they need help."
"So?"
Niki could hardly believe what Brehanna was saying. "What do you mean 'so'? There are people- animals out there that need you, and you say SO!?" She yelled.
"This is just a dream, so what does it matter?!" Brehanna yelled back. Niki slapped Brehanna across the face. Brehanna just stood there, shocked.
"See?! It's not a dream!" Niki screamed in Brehanna's face.
"So... This is really... real....." Brehanna muttered to herself.
"Alright. I guess I'll help." Brehanna said at last.
"I like your spirit, Niki." The figure said. It emerged out of the darkness, and it was a wolf. The same one that blew the horn. "You will be the leader of Wulf Pakk."
In the midst of a dark cave, two figures dared to have a conversation. "Sir, I do believe it is time." The first figure said, in a gruff voice. "Very well. Blow the horn. Go to the hill to do to so." growled the second voice. "Yes Sir." The first figure replied. A wolf emerged from the cave, it's damp grey fur shining in the moonlight. The wolf approached a large hill near the cave. It pulled out a silver horn with lots of jewels on it. The wolf put the horn to it's lips and played a sad song. It sounded like a cry of help from people who have gone through years of torture and abuse.
"C'mon guys! We have to get this." Niki said impatiently to the other girls. She flipped her red hair behind her hair just as one of them answered. "But Niki, it's SO late." Leo pointed out. Two of the other girls replied to Leo's comment. "Yeah Niki." They chimed. The fifth girl in the white shirt and grey and pink plaid skirt (which is what the other girls were wearing, but the pink was replaced with their favorite colors) looked pretty angry. "Niki, I have to get my beauty sleep." The girls all turned to the cheer captain for her response. "Fine. I suppose we can't cheer like this." Niki said sadly. "Fine then, let's all go home." Behanna, the one in the pink, said. Just as they all started out of the gym, they heard the most unusual sound.
It was a sound that expressed a lot of sadness. The girls all stood there, soundless and speechless. The floors shook a bit, and Sophie screamed. The floor cracked and all the girls experienced falling a very long time.
The girls were immediately on their feet. "What are these clothes?" Brehanna asked, for the girls clothes had changed. Niki was wearing a strapless turquoise leotard with a darker turquoise skirt over it. Her boots were also turquoise, a tad bit darker than the skirt (Picture).She had large red with black tips wolf ears at the top of her head, as well.( The doll maker didn't have ears like this.) Brehanna was wearing a short pink dress, strapless as well, and her boots were white with pink at the top. She had smaller grey ears. Sophie was wearing a red top that had white lace around it. She had a red skirt and white boots with red at the top, and her ears were small and brown. Leo was wearing a dark blue dress with a ribbon in the back, and she had dark blue boots. Her set of wolf ears were black. Rebbecca had a purple strapless shirt with a purple mini skirt and purple boots. Rebecca's ear's were white. Each of the girls had a tail that matched her ears. Each of them also had a a small black stick-looking-thing with gold tips.
"Is everyone okay?" Niki asked.
"What's this?" Rebbecca asked. "Where ARE we?" Leo pondered. "I'm fine." Sophie answered in a sick-sounding voice.
A voice said. "Welcome ladies." All the girls turned. "Who's there?" Niki asked in a demanding voice.
The voice chuckled, as if seeing the girls angry at it was funny. "I suppose I should introduce myself." It said.
"Yeah, and tell us where we are and why." Leo said.
"Alright, alright. Here's the story: For thousands of years this magical forest flourished with plants and animals." The figure sighed. "Then they came."
"Who is 'they'?" Sophie asked.
"They are... evil. Trying to tear down the forest and take over the magical creatures. For years, we've been waiting for you five to come and defeat the evil."
The girls all stood there.
"I'll help." Niki said determinedly. "Me too." Leo said.
"Us too." Sophie and Rebbecca declared together. Brehanna stood there, silent.
"Bre, aren't you going to help, too?" Sophie asked.
"No."
"NO!?"
"No."
"Why?" Leo asked.
"This is all a stupid and weird dream, why should I help?"
"Because, they need help."
"So?"
Niki could hardly believe what Brehanna was saying. "What do you mean 'so'? There are people- animals out there that need you, and you say SO!?" She yelled.
"This is just a dream, so what does it matter?!" Brehanna yelled back. Niki slapped Brehanna across the face. Brehanna just stood there, shocked.
"See?! It's not a dream!" Niki screamed in Brehanna's face.
"So... This is really... real....." Brehanna muttered to herself.
"Alright. I guess I'll help." Brehanna said at last.
"I like your spirit, Niki." The figure said. It emerged out of the darkness, and it was a wolf. The same one that blew the horn. "You will be the leader of Wulf Pakk."
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